Friday, August 24, 2018

MY PROUD WORK

I am proud of this work because I put a lot of effort into it, and I wanted to focus on my punctuation and I think I did well in that area. 

I learnt how to put punctuation in my story well. 

My next step is to make my story bigger and make my story not about Mountain Biking and make my Canva more interesting 

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments:
Positive - something done well
Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what we had to say
Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about

I am a student at Gisborne Intermediate. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.

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